Max was so proud about this story he wrote at school and when we read it, we expressed concern about the content which, in turn, made him cry. It is not a bad story, and I know that his intention was to entertain and his ultimate desire is to be recognized as a hero. But, the subject (a bomb threat to the school) could be construed as serious and not your typical 9-year old content. Maybe he plays too many video games? We made him change the bomb to a stink bomb. The change made the story light and funny instead of scary. This is the pre-edited version.
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